Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Conflict


Rough panels for conflict assignment. I got little too crazy with the tones.

10 comments:

  1. Dude, thats a great idea! You really matched the templates and made it interesting. Nice job.

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  2. I'm sorry Q but you really hit the mark with this board
    not only did u follow the steep outline/template, but u kept it all staged well (the boss is always on his side).

    panel 6, 8, 9, and 11 are personal faves.

    well done

    -King

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  3. Holy crap. so many responses.. something is wrong here.

    Jeremy, Deb, thanks :)

    King, Panel 6 is my fav as well :)
    the location of the boss in relation to the door got little tricky at the end

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  4. panel one is hilarious..
    panel 6 just shows cognitive prowess on your part..

    my only suggestion is that in both panel 10 & 11 you give us just a bit more negative space between characeters and objects

    -King

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  5. bwaahahahha man this rocks. I love the caption under panel 8 man. Great camera shots, and staging. Keep it up man!

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  6. ur really good at this~ and really used the line effectively! nice camera shots and use of tone ^^

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  7. Ape, Letti, Angela thank you three :)

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  8. you did a great job, q...

    the tonal was alright ....no you didn't go overboard with the tone....

    keep up the good work ...

    john d williamson
    "mr big manimation"

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